大作文语料库

背景引入

• it is quite common these days for sb. to ...
• it is a sober reminder that sb. ought to channel attention to sth.
• Much ink has been spilled on ……

亮明观点

• from my vantage point, ..…… plays a pivotal role in the fabric of our daily existence.
• the obvious argument in its favour is that ……
• The obvious argument against it is that ……

prons & cons

• the adverse impacts of ... usually overweighs any merits
• sth's downsides, such as ..., tend to overshadow its merits
• sth. has its ... traits
• catastrophic
• detriments

段首/中衔接

• Nonetheless, there is some truth to the idea that ...
• sth. can be classified into X distinct aspects
  • The first one worth mentioning is that ...
  • Another one revolving around the fact is associated with
  • Accordingly, both factors at play stand as a testament to the merits of ……
• So, in this sense, there is ...
• In my eyes, there are two measures that can be adopted to …….
  • The initial step is that ……
  • Another strategy worth mentioning is that ……
  • Both can serve as a lubricant for ……
• Let alone the ……

末段

• In a nutshell, despite ..., ...
• In a nutshell, as the cornerstone/an unescapable portion of people's lives, …… can deliver enormous and tangible benefirs. In this sense, only when we exert our utmost efforts to enhance …… can we varbe our a more enriched and fulfilling life.
• people's attitude toward …… are the main reasons behind ……. To address this problem successfully, the top priority is to ……, ……

让步

通过表达““这些缺点都是可以改进的”，削减其缺点的重要性

1. 使用“capable of being enhanced”

   • These drawbacks are all capable of being enhanced.

     • 解释：这种表达较为正式，强调缺点具有被提升或改进的潜力，适合用于学术或正式的议论文中。

2. 使用“prone to improvement”

   • These drawbacks are prone to improvement.

     • 解释：这种表达强调缺点容易被改进，适合用于论证和分析部分。

3. 使用“ripe for improvement”

   • These flaws are ripe for improvement.

     • 解释：这种表达较为生动，强调缺点已经到了需要改进的时候，适合用于引言或结论部分。